The Car That Would Not Start
By Louisa Monger
Once upon a time, there was a man called Tim. One day his land cruiser did not start. He pushed and pushed and pushed but it would not start. He went and got Rachel.
“Come and push this big white land cruiser” said Tim.
They pushed and pushed and pushed but it would not start. Rachel went and got Louisa.
“Come and push this big white land cruiser” said Rachel.
Tim and Rachel and Louisa pushed and pushed and pushed but it would not start. Louisa went and got Amisadai.
“Come and push this big white land cruiser” said Louisa.
Tim and Rachel and Louisa and Amisadai pushed and pushed and pushed but it would not start. Amisadai went and got Lulu.
“Come and push this big white land cruiser” said Amisadai.
Tim and Rachel and Louisa and Amisadai and Lulu pushed and pushed . It started! “Hooray! Where shall we go?” said Louisa.
(This story is very true, except for the bit about Lulu the Pig pushing)On Monday, Daddy got really stuck. It took a long time to get him out.
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| There were lots more people here than in my story |
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| It was really stuck in the mud! |
Great story Louisa! You'll have to write another story about where they all went when the car started. Did they go to Hasty Tasty? And what did Lulu eat?
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I hope you have written this story in book form, complete with illustrations! I like your grandfather's suggestions for the next few stories. You could write a series of books!
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