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We are Amisadai and Louisa Monger (aged 12 and 10). In 2010, we moved to Tanzania in Africa - look at the map below to see if you can find it! We hope you will enjoy reading about our adventures and looking at our photos! Please don't forget to send us a message too!



Wednesday, 25 January 2012

A Story by Louisa

The Car That Would Not Start
By  Louisa  Monger
 Once upon a time, there   was   a  man  called   Tim. One   day     his  land  cruiser  did  not  start. He pushed and pushed and pushed but it would not start. He went and got Rachel.
“Come  and push  this   big   white  land  cruiser”  said  Tim. 
They pushed and pushed and pushed but it would not start. Rachel   went   and   got  Louisa.
“Come  and push  this   big   white  land  cruiser”  said  Rachel. 
Tim  and  Rachel  and  Louisa pushed and pushed and pushed but it would not start. Louisa went and got Amisadai.
“Come  and push  this   big   white  land  cruiser”  said Louisa. 
Tim  and  Rachel  and  Louisa  and  Amisadai  pushed   and  pushed  and  pushed but it would not start. Amisadai went and got Lulu.
“Come  and push  this   big   white  land  cruiser”  said Amisadai.
Tim  and  Rachel  and  Louisa  and   Amisadai  and Lulu pushed   and  pushed . It started!  “Hooray!   Where  shall   we  go?” said  Louisa.
(This story is very true, except for the bit about Lulu the Pig pushing)


On Monday, Daddy got really stuck. It took a long time to get him out.
There were lots more people here than in my story

It was really stuck in the mud!

2 comments:

  1. Great story Louisa! You'll have to write another story about where they all went when the car started. Did they go to Hasty Tasty? And what did Lulu eat?
    Lol Papaxxx

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  2. I hope you have written this story in book form, complete with illustrations! I like your grandfather's suggestions for the next few stories. You could write a series of books!

    Blessings to you both
    Luella Meigen

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